My Activity Yesterday

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I woke up at 8 A.M. I out of bed  at 9 A.M. Then I prepared breakfast for my family. then, I cleaned my house in the morning and swept my carpet with the vacuum cleaner , at the same time I was listening to music .
      I made lunch for my guest , after that we ate lunch we spoke about somethings and my husbent  went shopping with his friend.
In the afternoon Mahmoud and I drank tea and talked together and I taught Math and Farsi to my daughter Tannaz .
     I the evening my children were playing with together  , while my husband and I were practicing English, after that , we ate dinner then brush our teeth and went to bed to sleep.
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After Edit

I woke up at 8 A.M. I out of  bed  at 9 A.M. Then I prepared breakfast for my family. then, I cleaned my and vacuumed my carpet while I was listening to music.
I made lunch for my guest. After that we ate lunch. we had a chat about somethings and my husband went shopping with his friend.
In the afternoon Mahmoud and I drank tea. I taught Math and Farsi to my daughter Tannaz.
In the evening my children were playing together, while my husband and I were practicing English. After that, we ate dinner and went to bed to sleep.